In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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Over recent years, there has been a marked shift in population demographics worldwide, with inhabitants of rural locales increasingly relocating to urban centres. I contend that this trend is largely deleterious, carrying far-reaching consequences for both metropolitan and bucolic communities.
A primary issue linked to this urban influx lies in the escalating burden it imposes on city resources and infrastructure. The mounting demand for facilities such as housing, public transportation, healthcare, and education precipitates a considerable strain on already stretched city resources, potentially leading to their insufficiency. A vivid illustration of this problem can be found in the housing sector where cities find themselves wrestling with the challenge of accommodating an ever-growing populace. The fierce competition in the housing market inflates rental rates and makes affordable accommodation increasingly elusive, thereby placing undue stress on those with limited financial means.
Moreover, the diminishing rural population inflicts severe damage on agricultural sectors and the broader rural economies. As fewer people remain in the countryside, the workforce engaged in agriculture contracts, directly affecting the capacity for food production. Particularly in regions heavily reliant on farming, this mass migration results in a notable loss of skilled labour. With younger generations abandoning their rural roots, the generational transmission of agricultural knowledge and expertise suffers, thereby negatively impacting traditional farming practices and overall productivity. This diminished workforce often struggles to meet the rigours of crop cultivation and harvesting, potentially causing a reduction in agricultural output and even food shortages. In summary, the mass migration from rural regions to urban centres, and the consequent dwindling of countryside populations, has far-reaching and predominantly negative implications. The primary consequences are urban overcrowding and the potential compromise of food security, both of which are serious issues that warrant urgent attention.
(By Khang IELTS- IELTS MASTER HCM- ENGONOW- Band 8.5)
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